XIII

Hey

First of all, I love the design here. Very simple and dynamic at the same time. I like the attitude of the character and the color choices. A bright red does a nice contrast with that blue-ish/cyan. Also, the camera strap seems pretty well done. It's not stiff, and it doesn't look like water. The folds feel correct. Shadow election of colors is OK, too, particularly well done in the camera. In general terms, it's a work you can feel proud of. For that, congratulations

Now, let's get into details and the business. Although the overall form is correct, anatomically speaking, there are 2 details you should put a little bit more focus. Notice how the camera lens doesn't quite fit with the angle of the camera. Your camera is looking to the viewer at the lens and looking to the right where the hands meet (the way he is holding it). To correct that you can either re-do the hands so they fit the lens or the lens to fit the body of the camera. I'll vote for practical matter to the second one. To do it, learn a little bit on perspective with circles. You'll notice one thing, as it goes on the perspective the circle will turn into an oval, and there is one very important characteristic of ovals, which is the furthest point from the center which gives the sensation of curves. In your camera, I can see 4 dots perfectly aligned (between the lens and the body, where you can zoom in and out) (bear in mind these points don't actually exist, you have to imagine them), but the lens part looks almost like a circle. You first flat that circle so it would look like an oval, and then tilt the axis so it will match the other ovals and enter in the correct perspective.
2nd detail is the cat. It doesn't quite fit with the character. You need to add some lights to it (so we can see its actual form), and you need to take into consideration that if the cat is hanging on the shoulder, we shouldn't be able to see most of his body, let alone the tail

Other than that, I would have preferred little with the detail on the hands, but that's because I have an obsession with them and I like to see details on the nails >.< But nevermind that, I think that they work as they are.

I hope this helps.

Keep up the good work.

Cheers.